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For many, shopping malls are great places to spend their leisure time and meet others. People, however, in the past mostly visited those when necessary. To what extent do you think this is a negative trend?

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Trips to shopping malls have now become comparatively frequent for everyone. Previously, people would take a trip to
shopping
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 plazas only when they had some errands to run. Today,
however
, it has become rather a source of entertainment for many; a place most choose to meet people and have fun than to just shop. While some take it as a negative
trend
, I somewhat disagree with that notion. It is believed by some that since the rise of
this
trend
 to go to shopping malls as a leisure activity these
place
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 have become immensely crowded.
This
 high influx makes the shopping
experienece
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experience
 of serious buyers rather unpleasant. The
salepersons
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salespersons
salesperson
 are hardly able to
diffrentiate
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differentiate
 between window-shoppers and people who come with the intention of shopping;
therefore
, are unable to focus on serious customers, effectively. As a
results
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,
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erformance of businesses gets jeopardized.
On the contrary
, others argue
this
trend
 has brought along some benefits, too. Over the years, it has become evident from sales records of different shops and brands that with more people coming to the malls, the profits have boasted. It is for the reason that even the people coming to
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ntention of hanging out, end up buying something and adds to the
over-all
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 sales.
In addition
 to that, as the life of a person is much busier today than it was before; a trip to
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all not only gives one opportunity to shop, meet friends and family and have fun, all at once but
also
 enables to save some time. To conclude, I would say that despite some negative impact,
this
trend
 has proven to be more beneficial not only for people but for businesses as well.
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