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Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following ways of learning a foreign language. State which you consider to be the most effective. studying on your own taking lessons with a private tutor taking lessons as part of a class taking lessons online going to live in a country where the language is spoken

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We are living in an age when many people
study
 foreign languages, it is becoming much more popular every day. There are so many ways to do it
such
 as taking classes online, studying alone and even go to the country where people spoke
this
language
 and live there. As I can see, all of these methods have some advantages and disadvantages as well. In the following essay,I am going to take a look at it. In my opinion, the best way to
study
 it is lessons with a teacher on the internet.
Firstly
, you can do it from any place on the Earth, you just need the Internet.
Secondly
, You can
study
 the
language
 from a native speaker and
finally
,you do not have to spend time going to the lessons, you can spend
this
 time learning.
On the other hand
, people may think that it is possible to learn the
language
 on their own. I believe it is true, but at the same time,it is really hard. From my point of view, it is almost impossible, especially in the beginning, when you can not really understand what is good and what is bad.
Also
,the motivation might be a big problem, when you do not feel the progress it is easy to give up. Other people believe that it is a good idea to go to a country where people speak
this
language
. I believe
this
 is a good way, but you already have good knowledge of the
language
 which you want to improve. I had
this
 experience once, I came to Chicago to
study
 English and during three months it became much more fluent
then
 it was before. Taking everything into account, I would say that all ways of studying are good, but the process of studying the
language
 is not so simple. I strongly believe that we have to combine all the ways, the more we
study
, the faster we will learn a new
language
.
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