Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
In our daily lives, we are exposed to various kinds of advertisement. Each day, advertising agencies are coming up with creative ideas to attract
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Recent research on human behavior
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change are mainly high income, lifestyle and the
societal views. Advertisers project any product/ service in a way that makes a compulsive statement, thereby people tend to think that as an essential good/service and fall in the trap. Remove the article
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For example
, advertisers project that,
a health drink contains all the natural fruits and vitamins but in reality, most of the ingredients will be preservatives and chemicals. Attracted to these advertisements, children will compel their parents to purchase the same. Here, parents should Remove the comma
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a decision by choosing a healthy option for their children rather than making an impulsive buying.
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us up to date on any new products/ services Change the verb form
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help people to know on any deals that
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- although
- even though
- despite
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