Writing task 1 (a letter) Your local council is closing the children’s playground in your locality as not many children visit the park. Write a letter to the council requesting not to close it. Include the following in your letter: – How important is the playground for children? – Why don’t children go to the playground? – What can be done to bring children back to the park?

Dear Sir
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Madam, I am writing
this
letter to you in order to reconsider your decision about closing the city's playground.
To begin
with, the magic planet playground brings many benefits to the children in our city. Not only does it allow them the chance to play sports
such
as basketball, but it
also
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valuable opportunity in order to be close to nature. In fact, children these days,
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almost everywhere, have adopted a sedentary
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lifestyle
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life style
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. Most of them find video games much more appealing than outdoor activities.
Accordingly
, only a few numbers of them tend to visit the park. There are some measures,
however
, that could be considered in order to render the park more attractive to youngsters. If the local council built a swimming pool in any available area of the place,
this
would definitely tempt many offspring to visit the park.
In addition
, establishing a food court that provides at least popcorn and ice cream would be a huge attraction. Thank you for taking the time to read my letter and I again hope you would retreat your decision. Yours faithfully, Sam Smith
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