Writing task 1 (a letter) Your local council is closing the children’s playground in your locality as not many children visit the park. Write a letter to the council requesting not to close it. Include the following in your letter: – How important is the playground for children? – Why don’t children go to the playground? – What can be done to bring children back to the park?
Dear Sir
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letter to you in order to reconsider your decision about closing the city's playground.
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To begin
with, the magic planet playground brings many benefits to the children in our city. Not only does it allow them the chance to play sports Linking Words
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valuable opportunity in order to be close to nature.
In fact, children these days, Add the preposition
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lifestyle
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. Most of them find video games much more appealing than outdoor activities. Correct your spelling
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Accordingly
, only a few numbers of them tend to visit the park.
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In addition
, establishing a food court that provides at least popcorn and ice cream would be a huge attraction.
Thank you for taking the time to read my letter and I again hope you would retreat your decision.
Yours faithfully,
Sam SmithLinking Words
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