In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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not popular among youngsters in some nations nowadays.
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having a lot of social networks and newsletters and
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additional monthly fees. There a number of solutions should be implemented to deal with
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ecreased rate of followers of news on
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and newspapers.
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, the main reason
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young people who do not prefer to get news from newspapers or
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is that major of them use social network applications on their mobile phones.
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, those platforms provide them
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a great chance to obtain any news instantly in any place without any distance restrictions or
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, when people intended to get news from
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ewspaper they have to wait
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newsletters,
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, social network apps send them notifications about what happened over the world.
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, people have to purchase newspapers or have to pay
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dditional charge ever month for getting
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channels.
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to say, people try to avoid a waste of money. There are two effective solutions to the problem of
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newspaper readers. One way to tackle
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is to ensure that readers can easily grab newspapers.
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oung people use public transportation as a transport mode in urban areas and sharing newspapers in buses or on undergrounds encourages them to read.
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, the companies which press daily news or
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channel companies should reduce the prices. As a consequence,
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igh number of juveniles can afford it and increase readers. IN conclusion, despite the problem having common in many places, distributing
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ewsletter in places where young people come together and reducing
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ost to be implemented,
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