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Nowadays
this
is increasingly common that in some countries more than half of their society is conquered by the figure of youth rather than the elders. There are several merits and drawbacks on the
one
side
this
can encourage economic status of
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ation while there would be
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ack of experienced brains. On the
one
hand
, the prominent benefit by more youngsters can bring the
Nation
into more productive recession
therefore
if the recession consists of a large figure of teenagers create
an
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high level of production through that it would positively result in the overall financial income of the
state
consequently
this
would reflect in the
development
of the society.
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,an article from the famous economic magazine reveals that the main causative factor of the
development
of Indian recession is the more
number
of adults in their people so the increasing statistic of fresh brains brings the
nation
into the fastest growing
economy
.
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hand
, significant demerits of the higher young
state
that, the
lack
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this
is increasingly common that in some countries more than half of their
population
is conquered by the
number
of youth rather than the elders. There are several merits and drawbacks on the
one
side
this
can encourage economic status of
n
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ation while there would be
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ack of experienced brains. On the
one
hand
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the prominent benefit by more youngsters can bring the
Nation
into more productive
economy
therefore
if the
economy
consist
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of
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igh level of production through that it would
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in the overall financial income of the
state
consequently
this
would reflect in the
development
of the society.
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an article from the famous economic magazine reveals that the main causative factor of the
development
of
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economy
is the more
number
of adults in their
population
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number
of fresh brains bring
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ation into the fastest growing
economy
.
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hand
, significant demerits of higher young
population
that, the
lack
of
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personalities.
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only the reputed personality have the capability to shape and build the adults into
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effective and more efficient in their activities only through that they can run
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state
into a developed
economy
.
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the popular multinational company
TATA
is running by the advice from the eldest member in their family who is Ratan
TATA
Conclusively the seniors and juniors are the two sides of a coin variation in the proportion their
population
have both dark and bright sides
although
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oungest
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have more of the
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-experienced personalities.
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only the reputed personality have the capability to shape and build the adults into an effective and more efficient in their activities only through that they can run the
state
into a developed stagnation.
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,the popular multinational company
TATA
is running by the advice from the eldest member in their family who is Ratan
TATA
Conclusively the seniors and juniors are the two sides of a coin variation in the proportion their people have both dark and bright sides
although
the youngest community have more of the
nation
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