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What are the advantages and disadvantages of taking English lessons with classmates from the same country?

#english #lessons #classmates #country
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Many
students
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 are interested in learning
English
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. Some
students
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 can go to
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English speaking
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 countries and learn with other
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 from all over the world. Most
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though
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study in their own country and have to learn with people who have the same first
language
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 as they do. I would like to discuss the advantages and disadvantages of
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Firstly
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, if a student doesn’t know the meaning of a word or understand the teacher they can ask one of their classmates for help.
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, the teacher will understand what problems the class have with learning
English
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 and be able to help them with the things that they find most difficult
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, if a student is shy or just lazy they can speak their own
language
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 in the lesson all of the time and not communicate in
English
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. If they
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ask their friends for
 help too often, they won’t improve their skills.
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, it can be helpful for
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 if they can get help from friends who speak the same
language
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 as they do. If the whole class speaks the same first
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, he or she can help them with difficult grammar and vocabulary.
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, if a student is in a class where everybody has the same first
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 they have to be very motivated to be successful.
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