Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest of our lives, while others believe that adult life brings more happiness.

The question that whether people spend most loveable moments of their
life
when they are young or real happiness can only be enjoyed in adulthood is debatable.
However
, it
also
depends upon the personal experiences of every individual in making any of these phases of
life
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. Advocates of
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that young age is the golden phase of
life
, are correct up to some extent. One main reason for it is that youngsters live
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arefree
life
without being accountable for their acts. They do not worry about their futures and their mistakes are usually avoided because it is a period of learning and evolving for them.
As a result
, they feel less stressed than, counterpart adults do and,
therefore
, live a happier
life
.
Moreover
, a factor of evilness and jealousy is absent among adolescents
that is
also
a key to
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appier
life
. If a person would spend his
life
without carrying hatred for anyone in heart, it is more likely to lead a blissful
life
.
On the other hand
, some people think that
life
becomes more beautiful after reaching adulthood. People came out from the stage of immaturity. They took smart decisions that brought success and benefits to
life
, and by doing so, a sense of satisfaction is
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uildup in their minds that lead to
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ore happy
life
.
Furthermore
, people became more independent in their late twenties. They had a chance to go wherever they want and do whatever they love to.
However
, in my opinion, it is the
life
story of a person that tells which phase of
life
was better than
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.
For instance
, if I look back and think, I would never desire to go back. Even though
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adult
life
involves more responsibilities, it
also
brings confidence in your judgments, in every area of
life
. In conclusion, what is for sure is that every phase of
life
has its own charm; it is the circumstances that might make one precious than the other.
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