Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while other think there are disadvantages to this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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it is thought by some people that advertising has great benefits, while others believe that it provides many problems. In my opinion, I consider that having sponsorships
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sports helps to avoid financial worries. On the one hand, some people think that companies which
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sport events or sportsmen by providing equipment and with other demands are good, and I completely agree.
In other words
, players can focus on their sports
instead
of being distracted by financial problems because most
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of the money related works are figured out by sponsors.
For example
, during the international competitions
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many companies offer to join
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ournament as a sponsor by providing accommodation and travel expenditures of competitors.
Furthermore
, people would be able
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ake informed choices about products. To illustrate, sportsmen who use products of sponsor companies give information about the quality and prices of goods.
On the other hand
, it is often believed that some companies advertise products harmful to health.
That is
to say, there are a lot of brands which brings many health problems with them.
For instance
, tobacco companies, among others, should not
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llowed to sponsor
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events because it might encourage many people to consume those products.
Moreover
, if
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layer is unsuccessful, it might affect product sales.
This
is because the companies’ reputation can be tightly linked to a players’ reputation and when players drug or misbehaves will have
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negative consequences for the company. In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinions, I think that if companies are encouraged to be sponsorship, it can bring many benefits
such
as reducing money related worries and provide information about their products.
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