Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while other think there are disadvantages to this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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it is thought by some people that advertising has great benefits, while others believe that it provides many problems. In my opinion, I consider that having sponsorships

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sports helps to avoid financial worries. On the one hand, some people think that companies which

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sport events or sportsmen by providing equipment and with other demands are good, and I completely agree.

In other words

, players can focus on their sports

instead

of being distracted by financial problems because most

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of the money related works are figured out by sponsors.

For example

, during the international competitions

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many companies offer to join

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ournament as a sponsor by providing accommodation and travel expenditures of competitors.

Furthermore

, people would be able

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ake informed choices about products. To illustrate, sportsmen who use products of sponsor companies give information about the quality and prices of goods.

On the other hand

, it is often believed that some companies advertise products harmful to health.

That is

to say, there are a lot of brands which brings many health problems with them.

For instance

, tobacco companies, among others, should not

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llowed to sponsor

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events because it might encourage many people to consume those products.

Moreover

, if

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layer is unsuccessful, it might affect product sales.

This

is because the companies’ reputation can be tightly linked to a players’ reputation and when players drug or misbehaves will have

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negative consequences for the company. In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinions, I think that if companies are encouraged to be sponsorship, it can bring many benefits

such

as reducing money related worries and provide information about their products.