The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

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The enormous growth in the use of the internet over the
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problems of the internet is the lack of personal data privacy which nets get access to your personal info and can share all over the internet platform.
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, everyone had come across with registration to a social media like Instagram, Facebook, tik tok and so on.
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, no one had not thought about the data that they shared.
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, the vital and most private data used by hackers where they can create
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ake bank account and transfer nonlegal transaction which leads to criminal. And while humans chilling of using social media somebody cheating a government and all these actions happen under your name and based on the data you have provided. A possible solution to the above-mentioned problem is to provide less private information about users.
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, the big organization should take on the responsibility that human’s personal data will not be shared on other platforms.
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some special document about confidential and non-distribution have to be signed to both sides.
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, in the Google Corporation, the data that employer face during the work period and after will not be shared out of the office. To sum up, technologies are developing every decade. To considering
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reat corporation should respect private data of users. As the main consumers of the products are people and only consumers can dictate the rules.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cybersecurity
  • phishing
  • identity theft
  • misinformation
  • fake news
  • social isolation
  • internet addiction
  • data privacy
  • digital literacy
  • regulations
  • awareness programs
  • manipulate
  • proliferation
  • consent
  • escalated
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