Some students prefer classes with open discussions between the professor and students and almost no lectures. Other students prefer classes with lectures and almost no discussions. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

No one can deny that there are both negative and positive aspects of the
way
we are learning
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. If I were forced to choose, I would definitely prefer classes with open
discussions
and no lectures. It is my firm belief that learning without
discussions
is just a vast null hole for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin
with, we can know more
information
and
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our learning limits with an open
discussion
. In the past years, schools and teachers
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to give a huge amount of
information
that we have to save and never forget
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. I have to admit that my opinion on
this
matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. You see, in my early years of
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, when I was in secondary one, in the first session I attended, the professor overlapped the
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we used to learn
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. He just told us to think, pair and share. He put a question on the board and left us thinking individually for a minute
then
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minute and
then
we opened a
discussion
to discuss all the outputs we got together.
As a result
, I listened to many answers from different perspectives
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eventually I got an enormous amount of
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my mates.
for
this
reason, I completely agree with the idea
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a
discussion
is better than lectures because we can collect a lot of new
information
from just an open
discussion
.
Secondly
, open
discussions
will make the student admire the subject and his studies more than just listening to lectures. Drawing from my own experience, when I was in primary stage I used to hate
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science subject, the teacher told me to be somehow close to the subject which
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didn’t like to study
it
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, or in a different meaning, to try to cross the barrier which made me hate
this
matter.
Moreover
, I listened to her words and tried to make
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and when I got to
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school in grade 10, I discovered that almost all sessions followed the
way
of open
discussions
, meanwhile, I began to get deep in
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biology
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and discussed with my professors and other mates in the class and began to understand what my teacher told me before. It’s certainly clear to see why I believe that open
discussions
are the real successful
way
of education. In light of the above-mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that open-
discussions
are more beneficial and essential than just listening to a lecture from somebody which
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the students to get more
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them the opportunity to get deep
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research and admire their subjects.
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task achievement
You should try to avoid minor grammatical errors and aim for more precise vocabulary and phrasing. For example, phrases like 'learning without discussions is just a vast null hole' can be made clearer.
coherence cohesion
Consider organizing your paragraphs with clear topic sentences and ensure that each paragraph addresses a single main idea. This will further enhance the logical structure.
coherence cohesion
Your introduction and conclusion are present and effectively frame your argument.
task achievement
You have provided relevant and specific examples to support your points, making your essay persuasive.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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