Some people choose to have their first child at an older age. What are the reasons? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Children play an important role in the life of people because they make their life lively. It is said by some individuals that some people want children when they get mature.There are several causes for
this
and there are various merits as well as demerits and these will be elaborated in the aforementioned paragraphs.
To begin
with,the
first
feature is that some people like to have children after settling their career because these days they live in singular families in which both parents are working,so it is difficult for them to take care of a child.
Moreover
,some people want to become financially sound before giving birth to children and they save some money for
f
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uture.
For instance
, One of my friend named Ramandeep got married at the age of 25,but she gave birth to a baby girl in her late thirties because she did masters and after that
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she became busy in her career and she had signed a contract in which it was discussed that she can not produce children up to four years ,and when she reached in late thirties she became financially sound.
Consequently
,when people start earning a sound salary,
then
they can afford a servant.
On the other hand
, there are several drawbacks to
this
trend.
Firstly
,females who produce children at late thirties ,
then
some complication arrive in their life which can lead to pregnancy at risk,and sometime it may lead to miscarriages.To illustrate,one of my friend named Amandeep got pregnant at the age of forty,but there were some severe complications in her pregnancy.
Although
,it is not wise to delay pregnancy. To recapitulate, I would like to write that the disadvantages of
this
trend outweigh the
dvantages
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advantages
.
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