Some feel that school uniforms make schools safer for students, create a "level playing field" that reduces socioeconomic disparities and encourage children to focus on their studies rather than their clothes. Others say school uniforms infringe upon students' right to express their individuality, have no positive effect on behavior and academic achievement. Discuss both sides & give your opinion. Write at least 250 words.

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Few of schools feel that making schools uniforms mandatory decreases the display of social status competitions among students and due to reduction of
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. study is increased.
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, the rest of schools have a different view, rather they want to refrain students from wearing the common dress and convey that uniform doesn’t change student attributes towards their goals i.
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. education.
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. by cloning various actors and actresses dresses and selling it very cheap and they end up buying it as youth do follow their role models very closely on various social media and red carpets. And to showcase they can wear in public places, which can create a bit of disparity as not everyone is that rich to buy those clothes for their child. Due to
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if children are teased in their schools that create an inferiority complex in their mind and
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, Its good to let the child live in their own way and have an open mind according to society, but it should be a parental responsibility that they teach their offspring good values so that tend to ignore physical appearance rather focus on their development academically.
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thought of expressing individuality
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creates an opportunity in a child’s mind so that explore their creative minds for
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.g. various famous fashion personalities have mentioned how they tried different attire to see people react. To recapitulate, In my opinion,it’s important to teach values to children so that they don’t necessarily make
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omparison on other people appearance that would help all schools to ignore children wearing school uniform and they focus more academically.
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