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TEENAGERS WHO COMMIT SERIOUS CRIMES, SUCH AS BURGLARY OR MURDER, SHOULD BE TREATED IN THE SAME WAY AS ADULTS WHO COMMIT CRIMES. DISCUSS THE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF THIS AND GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION?

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Crime is increasing around the world, especially youngsters and adults are mostly involved in heinous activities. Which is an alarming situation, and it should be taken into account by government and authorities. Some people argue that offsprings who did an illegal act like committing suicide or shooting others should suffer the same punishment as for elder people. I would rather partially agree with the argument because it my viewpoint it would put a good impact on youngers and circumvent them from misdeeds.
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 with my opinion before reaching to a conclusion. It is an undeniable fact that teenagers get an influence of their bad company or watching thriller and adventures movies more than adults. Which sometimes push them toward the world of crime,
hence
 affect their whole life. Taking strict action against them would rather avoid them from committing crimes at the same
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, it would be an example for other offsprings not to involve in delinquency.
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ime it would lead them to become a burglar or murderer. It will ruin not only their own life but
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 it would be good to stop them at a stage which is not as offensive as it will be later. It
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ime, these juveniles are compelled either by the problems they face or by the environment in which they live.
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 happens that adolescent have friends that are elder from them and
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 innocence. All in all, it is the duty of parents to look after their juveniles and keep an eye on them. While government should make and implement separate policies for educating offspring about crimes.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • deterrent effect
  • equality before the law
  • psychological development
  • rehabilitation prospects
  • incarcerating
  • hardened criminals
  • tailoring punitive measures
  • developmental aspects
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