You have a meeting with your manager the next day. Write a letter telling him/her what you are going to discuss in the meeting. In your letter, you should tell: what you have done for the company in the year you worked there what changes you would like to recommend what training you require

Dear Sir I am writing
this
letter to highlight the
points
I will discuss in the meeting.
Although
, tomorrow we have a meeting but like to spotlight my
points
beforehand. Since
last
year, I have
assigned
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the task to prepare test cases in order to perform the quality analysis process on it. I have completed the work and got good reviews from the team. Apart from the previous one,
in
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the
second
project that allotted me over the
last
six months related to advanced automation testing. I know it is a great chance of learning the
advance
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technology, but the issue is the company has not paid version of
tools
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. The task I have assigned can be performed only by using that software.
However
, I have started working on its demo version, but before going the project live on the web, I required the tool for final testing. In spite of having a
few
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knowledge of it, I am expressing a need for online training, if the company can
provide
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. With the complete training and tool, I can give my best to the task. I hope you will consider my
points
and would like to discuss
further
on the bullet
points
. Thank you so much in advance for understanding. Yours Sincerely Shaveta
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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