These days many people leave their country to work abroad and take their family with them. Do you think benefits of this outweigh disadvantages in terms of family development?
Nowadays migration has become common practice by many families. the job opportunities are more and with high pay and with other family benefits. my brother and their family recently shifted to Australia, and he is it will be good for children as they get to meet people from different there are some drawbacks associated even though there are some disadvantages to working abroad,it is eclipsed by the advantages. In my opinion it is better to move to a country where the future of its family is bright.
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, children of many Indian families residing abroad can hardly speak their native language. Overall these cons are quite insignificant and can be ignored.
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