Some people believe that it is good for students to have the same teacher for several years. Others think students benefit more from having new teachers each year. Which do you think is better? Give specific reasons to support your opinion

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because usually, people don't like change. They know their schoolteacher very well and know which method of teaching he using. They have the near relationship and better communication, as well.
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; the student knows when the new topic coming, the
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, every change has an impact on improving and progress.
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gives betters results.
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; the new educator brings the new method of teaching, give the change for students to better develop. In my opinion is better for students to have the new
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, different instructors give students a chance to explore the world and understand themselves in another aspect. Everyone has their own perspective, which affects how they see the world, including themselves. So do teachers, information, attitudes, judgments they only show students one angle. The world is multiform and each person is a different one. So finding true selves is a procedure in which people got to know things in many aspects, in many point views, and only being taught by different instructors can give students
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chance. Two reasons above illustrate my view of 2 different kinds of education. Having teachers changing could benefit students in improve, diversify information and knowledge.
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