The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuel should be the most important global priority today. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that

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petroleum

products are

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the verge of extinction. It is often believed that

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safe and permanent

energy

need to be developed to replace the present one and I personally agree

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depleting fastly as well as causing many health hazard and polluting environment. One of the main reasons why I think that a new fuel ought to be explored is that

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vailability of current

energy

source is decreasing day by day.

In other words

, due to the excessive use of vehicles, the demand

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fossil fuels has

been surged

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, but the production is not

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up to

the level to meet the requirement.

For example

, in many countries, they do not

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petroleum for their use,

instead

, they depend on

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nations, mainly gulf countries.

This

situation has brought about the

energy

is an expensive commodity, eventually, resulting in

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ecessity of finding a

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parallel

energy

. Apart from

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,

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arbon footprint can cause many health problems to human. Burning of

this

produces

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harmful

fumes, which can lead to

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diseases to lungs and heart.

Likewise

, environmental pollutants are being produced, which eventually reduce the quality of air, soil, and water.

For instance

, a recent study showed that

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ffect of burned fuel is on nature is huge and the researchers proposed that having

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safe and renewable

energy

.

Therefore

, it is evident that a new

energy

resource like tide or wind has to be developed. In conclusion,

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enewable source of

energy

is highly demanded from environmentalists since we are, presently, facing a scarcity of fuel and I agree

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viewpoint.