Science advanced so much that it can now make it possible for people to live 100 years or even 200 years. Some people think it’s a good thing, while others think it is bad. Discuss both these views and write your opinion.
In the wake of science advancing, it makes human have an ability to increase their lifespan. Some people believe that it is many advantages, while others think that disadvantages outweigh the benefits. In
this
essay, I will consider both sides of the argument and give my own point of view.
Nowadays, scientific technology has changed our life
, such
as advanced medical technology. It makes human can live longer than before. For example
, if someone who gets cancer, we can expand our life
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lifetime
time
by the reatment
which is cannot be treated in the past. Correct your spelling
treatment
Moreover
, people can have more time
to achieve their goal or what they desire to do. The evidence is many people can live around 100 years or even 200 years. This
makes them have time
to travelling everywhere all over the world when they retired. Compare with the past, people just only can live around 70 to 80 years, thus
they could not enjoy their life
after they retired.
On the other hand
, it also
causes some drawbacks, like overpopulation and has an impact on the consumption of natural resources. It is said that our plant has already overloaded with too many people who live in, therefore
, if a
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can expand their lifespan to living longer, it would be to Correct your spelling
man
human
ncrease
the population issue. Correct your spelling
increase
In addition
, people living longer will consume more natural resources, such
as food, fuel, gas and so on. This
also
would be harmful to our plant.
In conclusion, although
to expand human's life
would be overpopulation which can cause the resource e
xpend faster. Add the particle
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However
, the benefits of advanced science are more than the disadvantages by a
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can be cured with the optimization of medical science and people have more Correct your spelling
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time
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