In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

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geing population may cause financial strain to the economy of their native country.
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ducational system to meet the latest requirement of work sectors may not be possible as they do not have sufficient finance for
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. Eventually, the youth, the taxpayers, are forced to contribute their earnings to look after the older population.
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in poor growth of the country in a long run.
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problem can be controlled if the
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of retirement is increased. In
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can be utilized,
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contribute to the economy by paying their taxes and they could, even, save some money for their
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taxes. Apart from
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ealthy adult can work
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, if his or her health permits. In conclusion, the older generation can cause some difficulties
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the economy of
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average life expectancy
  • developed world
  • increase
  • individuals
  • society
  • personal goals
  • ambitions
  • quality of life
  • leisure
  • recreation
  • healthcare costs
  • challenges
  • healthcare system
  • ageing population
  • shortage
  • available workers
  • economy
  • retirement planning
  • healthy lifestyles
  • investing
  • social support systems
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