Write a letter to a friend who will come to your country to work for 6 months. In your letter, you should: • recommend a city • suggest a few jobs that your friend could do • give some opinions about making friends with the locals.

Dear Rajeev, I hope
this
letter finds you well. I had received your letter yesterday, and it is always great to hear from you. I am thrilled to know that you are planning to visit my country.
India
is an amazing country, and there is a myriad of opportunities available here. If I had to suggest a city, I would advise you to try New Delhi.
This
place is the capital, and the top metropolitan and advanced city in
India
. There are tons of opportunities in that city, and many of my friends and family members residing there. For work, I would suggest the All
India
Institute of Medical Science. It is the most prestigious and
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university in
India
. There are various job opportunities in
this
institute
such
as hospital management or office administration.
Additionally
, the salary is decent, but the experience is even better. So I would strongly recommend applying to
this
company. I would
also
suggest that you should contact any other friends, who reside in Delhi. The reason being that they would provide you with information about various job offers currently available, and
also
help you with accommodation, and living expenses. I hope
this
would be useful information. Please feel free to contact me if there are any more queries, I shall be happy to help. All the best for your future endeavours, and give my regards to uncle and aunty. Take care. Best wishes, Shakib
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