Many people think that the government should spend more money on providing faster means of public transport. Some others think that there are important priorities(e.g.cost, environment). Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Transportation is crucial in the contemporary era. A group of people opine that the civil authorities should spend funds on locomotives for
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others reckon that there are other things like the environment, education,
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et cetera that the municipality should spend on. I deem that the governing authorities must allocate more funds for public
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as it yields
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some money for the
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and faster means of transportation could
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help in increasing the gross domestic product of a nation. First of all, people travel usually by bus, train, metro et cetera for both long and short distance travel.
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not only connects rural areas but
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urban areas with each other.
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a lot has been done so far, traffic is a nuisance in most of the developed cities. To reduce
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traffic civil bodies must increase the volume of public
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of spending money on other ventures like building a park or a sports arena.
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, by increasing the frequency of public means of travelling
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earns revenue.
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, fewer vehicles hit the street
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reducing the
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in the air.
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bus rapid transit system (BRTS), the number of vehicles plying on the road decreased by 20% in Brazil.
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to fund public parks, gardens, fountains and other aesthetic projects to add beautification to cities. Public expenses should
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increase in delivering quality education and employment to the youths. As the number of
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are chopped down to make way for development
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pollution
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is on the rise. Since there are fewer
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we need to plant more
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to increase the foliage of the city to curb
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spent about 1 million rupees to plant a tree around Pune city
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reducing its
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level. To recapitulate,
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it is necessary to plant
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and worry about global warming more funds need to be allotted to make
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more smooth and
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favourable.
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but
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takes care of reducing the number of vehicles on the roads.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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