In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The development of technology provides easier and cheaper access to reading materials. There is a popular opinion that someday
people
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books
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a recent survey by "ITMO" university on book preferences. Respondents say that it is Linking Words
due to
the feeling of leisure, they want to have rest from the screens that surround us everywhere. Linking Words
Furthermore
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such
as "Marwin" (the most popular chain of stores in Kazakhstan) make around 20% of their revenue by selling Linking Words
books
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books
, articles, anime etc. Correspondingly, the popularity of printed literature is timeless.
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and the magnificent joy of touching them. Use synonyms
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