Your neighbour has animals and they cause noise. Write a letter - Describe the situation - Suggestion to solve the problem - Tell him what will you do if he will not solve the problem

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Dear Jay, Hope

this

letter finds you in radiant health and

best

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the best

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of spirits. My name is Rushi and

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i'm

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one of your

neighbour

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. I am writing to inform you about

noise

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the noise

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problem which is I am facing right now because of your animals. Let me explain my situation, I'm working

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night shift. Due to

this

reason, I must have to sleep in

day

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the day

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time and due to your

animals

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animal's

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loud noise, I am not able to sleep well. Only because of

this

I'm suffering from

health

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a health

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problem. It will be really helpful

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if you close your door during sun time. So your dogs will not make noise outside of your house and I can easily get enough sleep. Would you kindly, think about my problem

please

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. If it will continue

then

I must have to complain in

police

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the police

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station and it will be west of time for both of us. Thank you for your consideration. Yours

truely

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truly

, RUSHI

Submitted by rushipatel1953 on Sun Sep 13 2020

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The Closing

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Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

160 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Your neighbour has animals and they cause noise. Write a letter - Describe the situation - Suggestion to solve the problem - Tell him what will you do if he will not solve the problem

The Closing

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