Nowadays more tasks at home and work are being performed by robots. Is this a negative or positive development?

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It is common to see that, presently, household chores are carried out by
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ifferent opinion about installing these machines at home, I, personally think that these are helpful since these gadgets are efficient and
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. One of the main reasons why I think that robots are useful, their performance is excellent when compared to humans in most cases.
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, as they have programmed to perform
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pecific task, they finish the work in maximum precision and perfection.
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, not only cleaning humanoid equipment would complete the task without giving repeated instructions but
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as well. Alternatively, real workers require guidelines and directions and often they would not do things perfectly.Apart from
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, these can be reprogrammed for
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while comparing with labour cost. Human workers should be given
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alary and other incentives every
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. But here with robots, they require only
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ingle purchasing cost, which would save the family from spending a huge amount on staffing house workers in a long run.
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geing population is higher than young ones, they installed robotic technology to assist their elderly generation and which was hugely
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amily budget significantly. In conclusion, even though individuals may have different opinions about using technology in their home, in my opinion, I think
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modern technique would bring many benefits.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Automation
  • Artificial intelligence (AI)
  • Humanoid
  • Machine learning
  • Task allocation
  • Operational costs
  • Manual labor
  • Disruptive technology
  • Ergonomics
  • Unemployment
  • Cybersecurity
  • Technological singularity
  • Redundant workforce
  • Innovation
  • Ethical considerations
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