• An increasing trend nowadays is for young adults to play computer games. some people say this is negative development . Discuss and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, young people use
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omputer as a habit.
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, some people think that there is a disadvantage of
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upward tread with them to play
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essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument and give my own point of view. Some young adults are facing stress in life,
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as they need to pay for rent, daily
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, they want something to relax and have
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games can make them
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pressure
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why there has
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increasing trend of people who enjoy
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computer
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, when they playing the games, they are just thinking
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how to play and win in the games,
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them do not pay attention
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the other things.
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, after they enjoyed the game they feel more comfortable and relaxing.
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, there
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issue of
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people who addictive on internet games, like they become less to share the times with their family and have a distraction from their social activities. The evidence is they play the games even having their meal, they do not talk with their family members.
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the impact on their child
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parent
relationships.
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, some of them just play
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games and do not have some social activities, even forget to eat and sleep.
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, if they spend the time on
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internet games
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they will less
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time to meet their friends. In conclusion,
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people play the games can relax their pressure.
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, I strongly believe that the disadvantages outweigh the drawbacks
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because they will
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the time
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staying with their family and distract their social life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Addiction
  • Neglect
  • Academic responsibilities
  • Social interactions
  • Physical health
  • Obesity
  • Poor posture
  • Repetitive strain injuries
  • Prolonged periods of inactivity
  • Improper ergonomics
  • Desensitize
  • Real-world violence
  • Aggressive thoughts
  • Cognitive skills
  • Problem-solving
  • Strategic planning
  • Quick decision-making
  • Transferable skills
  • Educational settings
  • Professional settings
  • Social activity
  • Multiplayer games
  • Teamwork
  • Cooperation
  • Communication skills
  • Friendships
  • Escapism
  • Stress relief
  • Unwind
  • Relax
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