• An increasing trend nowadays is for young adults to play computer games. some people say this is negative development . Discuss and give your opinion.
Nowadays, young people use how to play and win in the games,
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essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument and give my own point of view.
Some young adults are facing stress in life, Linking Words
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expense
expenses
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, they want something to relax and have Linking Words
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that playing Correct your spelling
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computer
games can make them Use synonyms
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become less. Correct your spelling
pressure
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increasing trend of people who enjoy Change the article
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computer
games. Use synonyms
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, when they playing the games, they are just thinkingLinking Words
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them do not pay attention Change the verb form
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, after they enjoyed the game they feel more comfortable and relaxing.
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people who addictive on internet games, like they become less to share the times with their family and have a distraction from their social activities. The evidence is they play the games even having their meal, they do not talk with their family members. Correct your spelling
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parent
In addition
, some of them just play Linking Words
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games and do not have some social activities, even forget to eat and sleep. Remove the article
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they will less Replace the word
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time to meet their friends.
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staying with their family and distract their social life.Verify preposition usage
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