• An increasing trend nowadays is for young adults to play computer games. some people say this is negative development . Discuss and give your opinion.

Nowadays, young people use

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omputer as a habit.

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upward tread with them to play

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games. In

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essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument and give my own point of view. Some young adults are facing stress in life,

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as they need to pay for rent, daily

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expense

expenses

, transports and so on.

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, they want something to relax and have

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found

that playing

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games can make them

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pressure

become less.

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why there has

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increasing trend of people who enjoy

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computer

games.

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, when they playing the games, they are just thinking

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how to play and win in the games,

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them do not pay attention

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the other things.

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, after they enjoyed the game they feel more comfortable and relaxing.

On the other hand

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issue of

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young

people who addictive on internet games, like they become less to share the times with their family and have a distraction from their social activities. The evidence is they play the games even having their meal, they do not talk with their family members.

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the impact on their child

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parent

relationships.

In addition

, some of them just play

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games and do not have some social activities, even forget to eat and sleep.

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, if they spend the time on

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internet games

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they will less

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time to meet their friends. In conclusion,

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people play the games can relax their pressure.

However

, I strongly believe that the disadvantages outweigh the drawbacks

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because they will

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the time

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staying with their family and distract their social life.