In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Renting or buying a home is a big decision. Many people value having their own real estates over renting because of adaptability and financial benefits. I believe that

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is a positive development for two reasons. Perhaps the main cause is the love for people and surroundings. While I concede a new place might be interesting and full of new amenities or opportunities, the problem is that most cannot always be accustomed to them,

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some psychological issues may occur

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atisfaction that

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been provided by the people living with for a long time.

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, many people want to feel

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ense of stability and security at their own homes since no

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has a legal attitude to sell the house or push a person to leave it. Another factor may be tax benefits that most people want to get from owning a home. It is true that some property tax deductions will be less providing that

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lives constantly in

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area. When it comes to selling the house, the price appears to be higher and probably all costs will be covered. The

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homeownership to be a positive development is

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ndependence

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crucial for everyone since it is possible to decorate or change some styles of a house as wanted. A

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positive aspect might be a permanent atmosphere that people can go to work and school where they feel confident. In fact, many children suffer from bullying and discriminations in schools especially when they move to a new place

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living in

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place gives them a healthy lifestyle and children do not usually face problems to study or get well together with counterparts.

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and the chance to get a promotion and respect. In conclusion, not only can

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homeownership bring conveniences, but it

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has some cost efficiencies.

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, I feel that it is always an advantageous idea to invest money to buy a property.