Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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The rate of the number of abortion cases are high all over the world and becomes a controversial and debatable topic of discussion. Few people, myself included feeling that abortion must be legalised while others are against it.
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essay discusses both standpoints.
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, why people are against abortion is because basically a growing human life is killed. According to OGcians, it is said that during the
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few weeks of impregnation, a fetus starts to develop. So it is natural for people to be against in killing the newborn life in the womb.
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, from a doctor's perspective, many illegal abortions will be on the rise and are rendered unsafe if not done in a sterilised setting. In a statistical report in 2018, the number of abortions worldwide were around 5.6million and illegal abortions alone contributed to 3.8 million.
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, abortions need to be introduced into the legal system because women need to have the ability to choose.
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, when a woman is raped or in an abusive relationship and found to be pregnant , she should have a choice whether to terminate it. In India, according to the Medical Termination of pregnancy act 1971, cases where child-bearing can cause bodily harm to the mother physically and mentally,
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if the fetus develops severe abnormalities when born, termination is the best option . Bringing a child into
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world is a wonderful thing but it should be brought in a stable, healthy environment. If there is no parental care or no proper environmental background to ensure the well-being of the child after birth, it is better to kill it in the womb than to suffer when born. In conclusion, I strongly support, not only as a Doctor's view but
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as a woman's viewpoint that termination should be legalised .
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