some people say that modern innovations bring a lot more problems than benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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mankind. In my viewpoint, I firmly believe that

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development has more advantages than any disadvantages. Mainly

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and brought luxuries in our life.

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, by the introduction of technical advancement,

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communication has been improved.

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availability

of

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nternet helped us to contact people, who live

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side of the earth.

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the geographical boundaries. Alternatively, In the past

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it was taken months to reach one letter from one country from

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. If we followed traditional methods, we would not have attained the advancement, which we have now. Another point here to consider is that , nowadays, students can search

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any information without any assistance. There are many search engine

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plenty of information about one subject.

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saves our time and can focus to study even better.

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online class would enable pupil who located

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emote place can join

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lass without having

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hysical presence.

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irtual classroom in order to accommodate participants from globally, especially, during

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COVID

-19. In conclusion, even though there some minus points can be associated with the new technologies, the merits are huge. Currently, we, humans, overly

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on

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