In Some areas of the US, a Curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult

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In some areas of US, a curfew is imposed in which the teenagers are not allowed to be outdoors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult, In my point of view it is a very progressive step towards the betterment of the neighbourhood and overall safety of the community Teenage is a very naïve age, safety and security are one of the foremost priority of every parent. With increasing cases of the kidnapping and burglary
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it is a positive step as it will act as a protector for the teenage , and in these harsh winter season it is usually advisable not to go outside alone as there are multiple cases where the cars are stuck in the snow with the battery out of juice or people are stuck alone in a secluded area alone at night as teenagers usually end up panicking and do something foolish and many of them have ended up in the emergency section of the nearby hospital With changing economic dynamics of US, there has been increasing in the crimes committed by the juveniles in many of the areas where the curfew is implemented, local police authority has been vocal about how it is the top priority for them to save the country's future from going into the wrong direction, Police Commissioner in his
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person is saying it is a violation of their rights, but when we check the intent behind these curfews it all creates a very positive picture as at the end of we have to think as a society and if we have to move towards the brighter side it maybe by a stick or by a carrot.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enforce
  • juvenile
  • repercussions
  • autonomy
  • adolescence
  • paternalistic
  • delinquency
  • municipality
  • ordinance
  • authoritarian
  • peer pressure
  • social dynamics
  • civil liberties
  • community policing
  • preventative measures
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