Some people think that formal education should start for children as early as possible, While others think that it should not be start early as until Seven years of age . Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

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modern era the attitude of people, especially in developed countries towards

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has been witnessing a major transition.

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, few people assert that formal

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is mandatory for children

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some other opine that it should not necessary till

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of children. let us delve deeper into the given thoughts of formal

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for children in the paragraph below before discussing my own opinion.

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with, there are certain inevitable advantages of children who start their early

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and foremost, while children during their nurture phase, it needs

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lethora of attention towards them and their mind capture new things frequently. Since children

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better direction via

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, their energies become more channelize and enhance

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ore productive mind. To substantiate , while children

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as early, they are guided by professional teachers and they

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activities of

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. Since

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very social beings and the main concept of socialization takes root in early childhood. As early

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leads them to holistic development, they understand the learning of team-work and

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ense of respect towards elders. To illustrate, a research conducted by

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niversity of British Columbia in 2018,in Canada on a group of 200 children between the

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of 4-7, out of 85% children have more understanding of social skills, more ideas their basic society discipline.

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, as people following the concept of start

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have multifarious factors and it has become the

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choice of

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some parents for their children.

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hild takes birth in

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amily, parents become their

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teacher and home is the

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school. To elaborate, while family consist of various members, children having

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ery unique quality of observation, and they learn various

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things from their family members. Since children

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ew words ,they try to imitate words with their close one's and it creates very unique qualities in kids.

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the practice of sharing. Even though children learn various skills like sharing, adaptability from experienced elders , it is clearly

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overall practical experience and it results

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hild. To cite an example, a University of Otago researcher has uncovered for the

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time

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evidence that teaching children to read from the

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five is not likely to make that

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any more successful at reading than a

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who learns reading later, from

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seven. In my opinion, I assert that it is

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denying the fact that children formal

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children more efficient. I am in

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early as possible. As it is

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that children’s capability of learning enhances with the more family members and with their teachings but children safety will remain always questionable. While parental perspective is

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considerable, later

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leads them to take more care of children and they have

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ossibility to leave their jobs causes financial problems. To encapsulate, since early

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leads various of positive perspective for benefiting the

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, children nowadays are more advanced due to nurture and they have

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apability to acquire

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they can manage.

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children who are specifically are not in much conscious of

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, who belong to rural backgrounds so they can acknowledge equally.