Social Media has helped us increase our virtual networks . this has isolated us physically making us social awkward in person. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give you opinion.

The virtual world is on the growing exponentially due to the presence of many social networking platforms,
this
has made us immobile and causing nuisance in our public life. I disagree
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the statement and the essay will focus on how digital platforms improve social life. The digital media has made the long distances come short , with video calling and instant messaging services we can get updates of our close ones in a very short time.
For instance
,one can face time their friends in the US or Europe or the even Antarctic to get an update of them and even share our feeling and stories with no waste of time, at no point in history was
this
possible to have
such
instant feedback or sharing of emotions in quick succession. Digital media deepens the bonds between people and makes them excited about the upcoming meetings. These platforms can help in avoiding any conflicts of interests , there are people across the globe who may share the same interests and with virtual networks,they can join together, create harmony adding more economic booms with these platforms as it gives opportunities to have a look at different places, plan and book the visits to these serene places .
For example
, one can use Air BnB ,Uber or goibibo to books hotels, ticket etc and
hence
encourage tourism. To conclude, in my opinion,social media is a place where we can learn, meet and share our thoughts with masses and has no impact on social life. These digital networks help us keep communication with our close ones where daily meetings are not practically possible.
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