You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter: correct the information in the article explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to bring to your attention a significant mistake regarding the Spring Festival

Market

in

Markham

in your recently issued magazine. In the article which introduced the Spring Festival

Market

this

year, it mentioned that the

market

would remain open until 1st February like

last

year.

However

, the

last

day of the

market

is actually 22nd January, which is almost a week earlier than the incorrect date on your magazine.

This

may terribly affect many people who read the article and planned to have a family outing after January 22nd. What’s worse,

this

mistake would negatively influence the reputation of

Markham

.

Furthermore

, some tourists might have a bad impression of

Markham

or your magazine due to

this

issue. I believe it would be a great idea to add a page to correct the date of the

market

in your

next

issuance.

In addition

, posting updates regarding the correct on your official website is an effective approach as well. Hope my advice is helpful and please let me know if you need any additional information. Yours sincerely, Kardi

Markham

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