You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter: correct the information in the article explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to bring to your attention a significant mistake regarding the Spring Festival
Market
in Markham
in your recently issued magazine.
In the article which introduced the Spring Festival Market
this
year, it mentioned that the market
would remain open until 1st February like last
year. However
, the last
day of the market
is actually 22nd January, which is almost a week earlier than the incorrect date on your magazine. This
may terribly affect many people who read the article and planned to have a family outing after January 22nd. What’s worse, this
mistake would negatively influence the reputation of Markham
.Furthermore
, some tourists might have a bad impression of Markham
or your magazine due to this
issue.
I believe it would be a great idea to add a page to correct the date of the market
in your next
issuance. In addition
, posting updates regarding the correct on your official website is an effective approach as well.
Hope my advice is helpful and please let me know if you need any additional information.
Yours sincerely,
Kardi Markham
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite