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Some people think that scientists and technology experts are more valued than musicians and artists. What is your opinion?

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Science and
technology
 have entirely revolutionized the world.It is said by some individuals that scientists and
technology
 expert get more importance in society than musicians and artists.In my perspective,these days in all the countries musicians and artists are enjoying the same level of status,but still
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scientists and
technology
 experts get a higher value and my viewpoints on
this
 issue will be elaborated in the aforementioned paragraphs.
To begin
 with, it is scientifically proven that when there is the emergence of any kind of latest equipment ,
then
 people use to give special attention to
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erson who had contributed in the development of that particular invention.
For instance
,when Alexander Abraham well made the invention of
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elephone ,
then
 he gained a lot of popularity,
similarly
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an artist named Kulwant Singh had composed popular music,but he did not gain any kind of attention.
Furthermore
, in order to make advancement in science and
technology
 individuals face a lot of difficulties,and he /she needs proper education of several years and he/she faces criticism for it before passing it,but if anyone can become musician and artist. To recapitulate,
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 would like to write that all the people should get equal importance in society.
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