Many people today are worried about the large quantities of waste produced by ordinary households. What problems are caused by household waste, and what solutions may be possible in both short and long term?

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In a modern world, where every people wants their own space and facilities, even though living with family. As because of
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to throw that litters
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appropriate place. Every problem has
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olution. The light would be put into
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roblem and their solutions. The major problems about the
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and there could be no separate bins for sorting that garbage.
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, 80 % of food
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is contributed by residence. Which
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carbon dioxide gases in their with
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but, due to very fast
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product and dumped area are coming near to residence area.
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particular land for
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ity is design 5 kilometre away from
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ity but, due to overdevelopment
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the house is near my 1 kilometre to those places. Which are
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the problems like, bad air qualities, affect a people health and dangerous for asthma or health issue with breath patients
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Especially, children and aged people. Every dark night there will be a beautiful day.
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problems the
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food, which is still eatable would send to poor people or animals according to type and standard of food by digits application. So,
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ame day, it would be consumed. The long term solution is
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and strict rules,
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imposed large fine, if people failed to followed rules. Recycle facilities could be implemented to reduced landfills. There are biogas plant would be built and organic
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will be going to reduced
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and generate electricity by that. In a nutshell, the modern complication has
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modern solution. People want individual life, which
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the harm environment. But, educated to people about problems and which has the light way to compete
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complication, could improve lifestyle without creating problems for the environment.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Waste management
  • Sustainable packaging
  • Environmental pollution
  • Overflowing landfills
  • Recycling efforts
  • Waste segregation
  • Composting
  • Biodegradable
  • Waste-to-energy
  • Public awareness
  • Single-use plastics
  • Renewable resources
  • Toxic emissions
  • Environmental sustainability
  • Resource conservation
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