Individual should not allowed to carry guns as it increases the crime and violence in the society . what extent do you agree or disagree.

There is no doubt the crime rate has been increased in recent times.
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ermitted to have a firearm, I personally disagree with
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statement because these piece of equipment saved many
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and not all shooting is dangerous since
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be a sporting activity.
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, guns have
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ublic in many countries, particularly, in developed ones, where it is normal to have one.
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permission to possess pistol for
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personal safety.
For example
, In the USA, the locals can access gun permission, as people live alone, criminals are so violent and cause damage to person and property. Eventually, for
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firearms
are granted. It has been seen that for an extent
this
reduces the number of offences. Alternatively, the society would be
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by offenders and may not be possible to live peacefully.
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, not all gun holders shoot others to kill or murder.
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is
also
a competition, even, it is an item of Olympics so it is naive to think to impose
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an on them.
Additionally
, some poachers carry firearms when they go for hunting and
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armless activity, just for fun.
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personal freedom.
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society. Interestingly, more death can be seen from
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oad accident, but it is not banned. In conclusion, while some opponents argue that pistols are banned for the betterment of
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society, I totally against
this
. By doing
this
, poor individuals, who cannot post personal security staff, would be suffered.
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