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Some people think that libraries are not important, while others think that they are important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Libraries are living treasure of information. Nowadays, interest to access
this
 become declined due to digitalisation. Some people consider
this
 is no more important and others don't.
This
 essay will analyse both views
however
, in my opinion
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libraries are most important and should not be disregarded in
this
 society.
Firstly
, it is a knowledge hub in which we could see the collection of all experience all in one place that too in all the fields and genre
such
 as engineering, arts, science , history etc.
Moreover
, it creates a favourable atmosphere for the people who are book lovers. It
also
 facilitates the reading skills of the individuals and for some people
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this
 is their recreation place especially for the senior citizens.
On the contrary
, owing to the digitalisation some people especially youngsters doesn't see any value on
this
, even though some might acknowledge the reading skills are important but,
this
 could be managed online by ordering whichever books we need, the classic example is book reading through Amazon Kindle. It
also
 gives the flexibility to learn on the go, nowadays audiobooks are trending online. It saves a lot of money to maintain those physical buildings and operating expenses. To conclude, both these statements have its own perspective,
however
, libraries are not only for storing books or it should not be seen as a warehouse of books, rather it creates
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pportunity to socialise with people , help exchange their ideas and making good friends which are more vital for social bonding.
Hence
 I sound strongly towards the importance of libraries.
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