You are due to start new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employeer. In your letter: •Explain your situation •Describe your problems •Tell him or her when you think you can start.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to inform you, I cannot start my new

job

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next week. I am Urvesh Dudhat and I got an offer letter for

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job

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just 2 hours ago. When I saw and read your email regarding joining a new

job

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. Immediately, I am writing

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letter to you, I have to take care of my father for 7 days

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heart surgery. No one is there to look after him. My father had a heart attack one month ago. Currently, he has been admitted to the hospital for 7 days and the doctor suggests that any family member needs to touch with him within 24 hours.

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, I cannot trust anyone in

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serious situation. I think I can join

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job

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after 7 days. Thank you again for giving me

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opportunity. I hope you understand my situation and hope to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, Urvesh

Darshita@8612Thu Oct 24 2024

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structure

Try to merge related ideas into a single paragraph instead of having very short paragraphs.

content

Include a more specific opening sentence to enhance task response.

tone

The letter uses appropriate language and tone, which is suitable for communicating with an employer.

content

The letter effectively explains the personal situation and provides a clear time frame for when you can start your job.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

159 words

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Nowadays, more and more people have to compete with young people for the same jobs. what problems could this situation cause? what solutions you can suggest?