Now-a-days many people choose to be self-employed, rather than work for a company. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantage of being self-employed?

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In recent years, the working habits

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drastically. Now

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most of the skilled people consider to work for themselves by having their own business and their team, rather than giving there precious time and tireless efforts for the progress of some other organization and to help them

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their dreams.

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with, having an organizational job which is bound to follow hard timelines in terms of attendance and less flexibility towards the employee personal health and well being often end up with a frustrated life.

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organizations like Google, Microsoft and Facebook already has taken

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issue very seriously and

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by providing all the

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flexibilities to their employees in order to maximize their productivity.

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, self-employment is not that easy as it looks from the far end. One has to deal with the hardest situations to win his bread and sometimes

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out the situations that one can not

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, if an

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decided to start his own consultancy and keep struggling in getting the projects

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will lead to the hardest survival situations for his startup. To recapitulate, it solely

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upon the set of skills that one has to decide

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to opt for being employed or go for self-employment. I strongly

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that with dedication, motivation and with the right direction anyone can turn the table around and live the life as he

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instead

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of waiting for the right opportunity or time.

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Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

249 words

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Now-a-days many people choose to be self-employed, rather than work for a company. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantage of being self-employed?

Fully explain your ideas

Some people say that wild animals have no place in the 21st century, and the protection is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There have been some problems with public transport in your area recently. Write a letter to the manager of the transport company. In your letter: Describe the problems. Explain how these problems are affecting the public. Suggest some changes that could be made

In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why do people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?

Some people encourage young children to leave their parents’ house as soon as they become adults while others say children should stay at their parents’ house as long as possible. Discuss both views and give your opinion.