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It is more important for a building to serve its purpose than to look beautiful. Architects do not need to worry about whether it is a real work of art. Do you agree or disagree?

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Undoubtedly, in the present scenario, where the construction field has made drastic improvement, the citizen do not just want their home to satisfy the building standards made the governmental body, in fact, they want them to look something
that is
 pleasing to their eye's. So the architect has to worry about the look's of the house, coupled with, maintaining the standard quality of material used for the development. To commence with, billionaires want their structure to be different from all the other buildings in the locality, for which they are ready to pay hefty amounts even, due to which it becomes the responsibility of the engineer in-charge to make sure that the property looks different,
for instance
, the Multi-National Company (MNC), Google had made their office in a completely different manner in comparison to all the other traditionally, build office buildings. Which make them stand out of the market and creates nice and sophisticated images of the organisation, because of which before even employing workers for work, the company had made its name in the market.
That is
 the only reason why industrialist pays that much on the outside design of the building.
Moreover
, nowadays, the individuals are more attracted by the physical appearance of the building, rather than it's to quality to sustain natural disaster, to exemplify, mostly people explain the site manager about the outer look of the structure and are hardly worried about the material
that is
 been used for the structure purpose.
In addition
 to
this
, there are many studies that have proven that humans prefer the outside appearance of the house, and the
second
 thing, they concerned with is the placement of the furniture. To summaries, it is an unsaid duty of the engineer to construct a design that even looks different from others, and even maintains the standards set by the lawmakers for the construction methodology.
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