some people are very interested in researching their family history . Other people say this is a waste of time and that we should focus instead on the present and future generation. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

There is no doubt that, currently, many youngsters like to know
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ancestors' history.
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it is sometimes thought it is an interesting thing , some people consider
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useless activity. In my opinion, I firmly believe that
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knowledge would bring many positives to a person's private life. Admittedly, there are some demerits can be seen along with
this
. The obvious one could be unearthing of family secrets, which was
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buried
in the past. By doing
this
can cause an embarrassment among relatives.
In other words
,
this
information can tarnish the reputation of some significant personalities.
For example
, a television programme called 24 and Me, which bring out many ancestors histories, that often result in conflicts. Another possible issue is here that process of collecting
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details
of the particular family is
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, expensive and tiresome. Despite the above-mentioned negatives, I personally consider the search of own roots has many benefits.
Firstly
, hereditary disorders, which run through the bloodlines can be detected at earliest.
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health issues can be prevented for a certain extent if it is diagnosed priorly.
Additionally
, when we understand we are the part of a big family, would give a sense of proud.
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special unit which keeps the family tree for the future reference as it is relevant for
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edical field.
Thus
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modern society. In conclusion, while supporters of finding roots of
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amily say it brings positive, opponents think that it is
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tter waste of time, money and material. In spite of the expense
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it is viewed as a fruitful initiative that can bring many beneficial changes to mankind.
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