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More and more parents are allowing their children to play on computers and tablets as they think the children should learn technology skills. What are the advantages and disadvantages

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It is indeed true that
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 plays an integral role in children’s lives, and undoubtedly they are permitted by their parents to spend some
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 on gadgets. I believe
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 is a negative development. Being able to be up to date with the latest
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 is its advantage, and having a detrimental effect on their health and studies is the drawbacks of it. On the one hand, allowing young kids to play on mobile phones is advantageous.
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 is because, today,
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 made everything accessible for young children by watching informative videos on youtube
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 as, to solve the puzzle and learning a new hobby,
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 is possible only when they are permitted by their parents. Due to
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, will they not only be familiar with new
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 and become tech-savvy but
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 it helps to broaden their horizon.
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, a recent article by the New York Times reported that Z generation is having 30% more potential to operate new
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 very well than the Y generation.
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, rendering millennial to spend some
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 with gadgets is harmful. Due to the fact that playing video games is the biggest addiction for all, the more access to the phones and laptops, the more easily concentration will be lost from studies, and
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 prevents them from having peer connection.
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, it has frequently seen that children who spend some
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 outside have a better friend circle than those who are addicted to video games on mobiles and laptops. Overall, I believe that it is a negative development,
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 is because playing on mobile phones or computers means children will be restricted from doing any outdoor activities and due to not doing movements they might become obese.
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 not only results in them being introvert and that would be a hindrance for them later when they become adult but
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 they are more incline to have health issues. In conclusion,
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 permitting children to spend leisure
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 to play on gadgets is beneficial as they become familiar with the latest
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, distracting concentration from studies and being not to be able to physically fit which I think is a negative development.
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