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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school. Use specific reasons and example to support your position.

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In my point of view, if you are not a speak English natively,learning
this
language
 at the beginning of school is a good idea because nowaday is the most necessary to know that principal communication around the world. There is a lot of reasons to learn another
language
 and get it as soon as possible will be helpful for the rest of life.
First
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 reason is that when you are young your brain is like a write shit without information and open to get something new
Second
,when a teenager learn another
language
 he/she understand that the world is bigger and is necessary to have an open mind,
for example
 sometimes people with a different
language
, they have another mind
Finally
 learn another
language
 as a young could get the school more interesting
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