Crime is a big problem in the world; many believe that nothing can be done to prevent it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.
Globally, criminal offences are spiking at tremendous rates. Critics argue that by no means
this
can be impeded. I completely disagree with this
thought. Analysing the upliftment of penalty grounds of crimes and enlightening via moral education will prove this
.
First
of all, law enforcement needs to be top-notch strict in all nations. This
is because weaker punishment laws encourage citizens to commence crimes with the hope of getting bailed within countable years. For example
, raping a woman gives imprisonment which is similar to the killing a human and involves a maximum of 6-10 years jail time; which instead
should be a death sentence for rapists. As a result
, there are shockingly increasing rapes in Asia. Therefore
, the judiciary system should implement strong laws to fear the criminals' brains even before thinking of performing the action.
Secondly
, inhibiting positivity among youth through education. The enlightenment from moral edification can transform the weak points of vicious brains. For instance
, schools in Kenya are having an hour session attached to every school day for awareness via real-life scenarios, God-realization aiming to inhibit good qualities in children. This
has reduced juvenile crimes such
as shoplifting and knife attacks by almost half in the region, therefore
preventing the crimes in the country in the long run as well.
To conclude, prevention is better than cure and thus
, crime rates can be plummeted by hardening the criminal penalty sentences and by engraving tactful knowledge among adolescents through education. This
is predicted many schools are universities are executing sessions to deplete crime rates globally.Submitted by kaurnavp09 on
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