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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others belive that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

#people #information #research #business #world #belive
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xercise in Australia in 2010. It was
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 by genders and according to the different ranges of age. Overall, women performed more physical activities than men in almost all the ages groups, except for those aged from 15 to 24 where men had
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 greatest percentage. Over half of the men aged between 15 and 24 were doing physical activities in 2010, with 52.8% whereas women accounted for 47.7%. When men and women were aged 65 and over, they performed physical activity with nearly the same percentage, with 46.7% of men and 47.1% women . Women tended to do more regular exercises than men in general.
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 those who were 35 to 44 years old, 52.5% were doing exercise. At the same age, only 39.5% of men were doing physical activity. The same trend
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 in the following age groups where women were doing more exercise.
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