facebook represents a very powerful medium of influence over large populations. There are many positive aspects of facebook. however many people feel that it is doing irreparable harm. to what extent do you agree with the statement? what do you think should be done to minimize the negative aspects of facebook

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digital

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is kind of application, which is used by 70% of the

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useful contents on

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has been proved by

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ot of people. But, every coin has two sides and

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also

has it. Many people have

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that it became harm to your life, which you can not payback. I strongly agree with that statement. I will put light on negative aspects and give a view to minimizing that.

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of co-operative companies have rules for employees, that do not put companies information or idea and new product information unless the

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release it. Because

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the news would be spread within a couple of

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to the

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ob, anywhere else.

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would be used by criminals and terrorist to manipulate youngsters. Youngsters are easily put trust in information are on

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. which leads to them on

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dangerous path, Which is very hard to back off.

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is

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ddicted

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addicted

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platform, where people are wasting

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arge number of hours. There are many to compact the bad influence of

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of all, there will be a time limit on every day to used

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, any person only used

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2 hours in a day. That would be cut off wasting time on

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,

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can ban

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some words from the application, if someone tries to use it. They will be disconnected by

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and only allowed after investigation. That would be protected youth to bad influence. In a nutshell,

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ig platform

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connecting with

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orld. But, when

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advantages. There should work on the problems and minimize the before its become dragon.