environmental problems are too big serious for individuals to solve and only big companies and govements can solve them. do you agree or disagree ?

The environment
comprenhed
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comprehend
not only trees, rivers, plants, rocks, mountains, etc but
also
all the living creatures. In that sense
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the
responsability
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responsibility
of taking care of the
problemas
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problems
related to it have been raised by the argument presented lines above, which state that only big companies and
government
can solve environmental problems. Personally
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I disagree with the affirmation because I believe that big changes should occur
first
inside every
one
of us.
First
of all, the
power
of the masses is
one
of the strongest
power
that
move
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the world. Each individual
carry
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a
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great
power
with every
decission
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decision
made.
For example
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regarding
to
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social media,
one
person can generate a trend, like the "ice bucket challenge",
this
trend could serve to a good or bad cause but has
d
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irect impact in the world itself. Another point is that only
one
person
know
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as an "influencer" can take down a company, or a brand. In that sense
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if
one
indivual
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individual
can
change
their behaviour and raise awareness and generate a trend that will create like a snowball and could have
signifcative
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significative
impact in reducing the carbon
footprint
. Another example is that if many individuals congregate and start to fight for a
change
. They could raise awareness about the importance of environmental problems within the
government
and like many "popular projects" , the
government
will prioritize it an actually take
action
and start to make it happen.
One
last
point to prove that
indivuals
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individuals
can really make a huge impact regarding environmental problems is that even if the other actors of
teh
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the
society do not take real
action
, if we as a group start to
change
our behaviours , like use less plastic, buy organic food, use reusable recipients, etc and reduce our own
footprint
in 30%,
then
we will reduce the
footprint
by 20% in our communities, 15% in the cities, 5% in the countries and
finally
1% in the world. Even though is important to highlight the critical role of an individual is relevant to recognize the role of companies and
government
to combat environmental problems.
First
, the use of
legisltaion
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legislation
can help
stablish
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establish
regulation to help to achieve less carbon
footprint
,
also
can create an incentive (reduce taxes)in order to incentive companies to take
action
.
Also
, companies through their social
responsability
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responsibility
program (plant trees) can help to reduce carbon
footprint
and gain more customers appealing innovative and trendy.
Finally
,
indivuals
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individuals
can take
action
and play an important role, in order to solve environmental problems, the
power
of the masses prove that the
change
need
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to come from the inside of us in order for the whole society to
change
.
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