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Some people prefer to work on school projects with a group, while others would rather work alone. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Regarding to working or studying on different tasks , people have their preferences some could prefer doingit alone or in
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. The argument above present the specific task:
school
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project
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. Personally I´d prefer working with a
group
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 rather than alone.
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 of all, working in a
school
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project
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 could be very demanding and sometimes
one
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 can have other responsabilities at home or
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 like extra curricular activities.
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 why being in a
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 can help carry the burden by splitting the
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 on different tasks: research of literature, search for statistics, formulate interviews, etc. that every member of the
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 can do it. Another point on favor of working in a
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 is that "two or three heads thinks better than
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", that pharse apply perfectly when you are looking for solutions, because
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person
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 can only see from their perspective.
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:
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 A could think on a
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 A that it will consume X hours to achieve the goal, while
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 B could think on the same
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 but with a twist that could help save half of the
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 that you would "normally" spend doing it, or
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 C could think in a complete different
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 that could take 1/3 of the
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 of the
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 that A present, but it would be less complex and could take away a few points of the grade. Even though is better to listen to all perspectives and reach a
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 counterbalancing each
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 of them, it will take a lot of
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 and a lot discussion to reach an agreement about what the
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 will end up doing it.
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, working alone in the
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project
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 will be less
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 consuming regarding reaching a decission of what to do because you can take the direction
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 you want. Another good point is that the quality of the
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 in all the aspects will be evenly and
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 you can have your own schedule about your deadlines in order to finish the
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 and worry less about if someone else is doing their part with the same passion that you are doing it.
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, I believe both choices are good and depends more of what characteristics you value more when working on a
school
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project
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. In my case I´d prefer working with a
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 because I value diversity of opinions.

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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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