Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Reading paper materials is better than watching electronic devices to gain information. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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can deny that there are positive and negative aspects of learning materials. If I were forced to choose, I would agree with
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statement which applies that reading
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is better than electronic devices to gain information. It's my firm belief that hard-based materials are beneficial and essential for several reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
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, reading
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materials are comfortable to the eyes. I have to admit that my opinion on
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matter has been profoundly influenced by my personal experience. you see, when I was in a secondary stage, at the beginning of the semester, our teacher told us that there are two sources the software
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and the other is the hard books, and we have to choose from
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of them to start studying. At
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, I chose the electronic ones as I believed that they are easier to
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, but unfortunately, I couldn't endure
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way of learning because my eye began to get stressed and most of the time its colour converted to red, so at the end of the semester I changed my opinion and used the
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materials.
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, my eye began to return to its normal state and I became more comfortable with these sources. For
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reason, I admit that reading
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is better resources relevant to our comfort.
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materials are more accurate and precise than an electronic
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. drawing from my own experience, when I was in grade ten, I used to
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the internet and electronic resources to approach my learning concepts and prepare for presentations.
one
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day, the teacher asked me to prepare for a presentation related to a biology concept, the
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day, while I was performing my presentation, the teacher stopped me and correct information I have been just told, and she asked from where I got
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idea, and after she knew
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from an encyclopedia found on the internet. She advised all of us not to
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the internet for learning
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details like that and it's better to
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the based and scientific hard books. It's certainly clear to see why I prefer reading
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aper than technological devices. In light of the mentioned- reasons, I believe that reading based materials are more guaranteed and include accurate information as it will be a comfortable source for your eye and brain.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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