A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her explain how to apply for the job

Dear Rahul, I hope you are in good condition and everything is well, back in your country. I am writing
letter in relation to
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Power and that position is of Jr manager involving work related to railway project planning. I think you will be a perfect fit for
job as you have done your graduation project management and as I know you are excellent with the software like MS Project, Primavera and AutoCAD, and these skills are required for
, you have
done your final year project in connection to railways. You can apply for
job by going on the website of KPTL which is www.kptl.com/career, here you have to select your field
that is
management and planning.
, you have to upload your CV on their website as well as your recent academic qualification. If you are selected, your interview will be conducted through skype. I hope you get selected for
vacancy. Best wishes Jay Tank
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